Yo, dude, listen, this is probably the only comments you've had in months(years?), and i'm here to help. look, i found you from cracked.com, you should be happy that i did on one of my good days, i found your thread, and found the word "comic", so that instantly gave you my attention, then you smashed it with a rock, by showing me that thrash. i will, give you tips, and it will change your life (and hopefully take down that comic of yer's).
okay look, when i saw your comic i literally(metaphorically)(figuratively) vomited through my eyes, it sucked, but then i read through it. it was okay, a lot of good stuff, but the drawings were horrible, i'm not saying it's bad, i'm just saying that it missed completely what a one-panel-comic should be... i would know. first, gather a drawing style, most comic's just need to be simple when drawn, look at dilbert, or calvin and hobbes, or the loading artist, they are very simple, basic shapes, look for what's easy to draw for you and your good. second, a one panel comic is one of the very hardest kind of comic out there, because the main point is that the words explain completely what's on the picture, and nothing else, this is extremely hard to pull off, but somehow you had... eh... 2% of good, which is actually pretty good, you had the concepts right, but the pictures failed, i would recommend using three-panel comic's instead.
and last,don't post it here, it will die a sad and lonely life, put it on 9gag, or Facebook, or CRACKED, just follow me and someday you might have a chance of getting 1% of good... comedy gold
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Yo, dude, listen, this is probably the only comments you've had in months(years?), and i'm here to help. look, i found you from cracked.com, you should be happy that i did on one of my good days, i found your thread, and found the word "comic", so that instantly gave you my attention, then you smashed it with a rock, by showing me that thrash. i will, give you tips, and it will change your life (and hopefully take down that comic of yer's).
okay look, when i saw your comic i literally(metaphorically)(figuratively) vomited through my eyes, it sucked, but then i read through it. it was okay, a lot of good stuff, but the drawings were horrible, i'm not saying it's bad, i'm just saying that it missed completely what a one-panel-comic should be... i would know. first, gather a drawing style, most comic's just need to be simple when drawn, look at dilbert, or calvin and hobbes, or the loading artist, they are very simple, basic shapes, look for what's easy to draw for you and your good. second, a one panel comic is one of the very hardest kind of comic out there, because the main point is that the words explain completely what's on the picture, and nothing else, this is extremely hard to pull off, but somehow you had... eh... 2% of good, which is actually pretty good, you had the concepts right, but the pictures failed, i would recommend using three-panel comic's instead.
and last,don't post it here, it will die a sad and lonely life, put it on 9gag, or Facebook, or CRACKED, just follow me and someday you might have a chance of getting 1% of good... comedy gold
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